neotoma: Roadrunner fetish goes "beep beep!' (roadrunner)
( Apr. 17th, 2011 09:27 am)
Considering I only have 12 stories on AO3, my top ten list isn't surprising, although what is at the top is...

Wow, I write mostly for challenges and gift exchanges )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: [personal profile] neotoma
Artist: [livejournal.com profile] cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho
Author's Notes Written for the [livejournal.com profile] gabriel_bigbang. I'm taking shameless advantage of the fact that Richard Speight Jr. played Deputy Bill on Jericho for this crossover...
Cheerleading by [livejournal.com profile] owleyes_arisen and[livejournal.com profile] mikhala_c, proofreading by [personal profile] greenygal, Russian help from [livejournal.com profile] alpheratz, and Norse help from [personal profile] ellen_fremedon


Birds of Passage -- cover image by cashay

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Prologue: I will lay my burden in the cradle of your grace
Part One: Every highway leads you prodigal
Part Two: Strange dances long undone
Part Three: The twigs and briars
Part four: Blood in the service of the lord of hosts
Part Five: Only the rain knows
Part Six: A voice on the wind, and the wages of sin
Part Seven: every backroad in that broken promise land
Epilogue: A dime and a dollar and a one-way ticket home

Link to art: http://cashay.livejournal.com/17549.html
Also at AO3, if you prefer to read it in one chunk without the art.
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Jake title

Epilogue: A dime and a dollar and a one-way ticket home )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Sam title

Part Seven: every backroad in that broken promise land )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Bill title

Part Six: a voice on the wind, and the wages of sin )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Hrafn title

Part Five: only the rain knows )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Sam title

Part 4: blood in the service of the lord of hosts )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Mimi title

Part Three: the twigs and briars )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama), Sam/Gabriel/Vessel
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Sam title

Part Two: Strange dances long undone )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama)
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]

Jake title

Part One – every highway leads you prodigal )
Title: Birds of Passage
Author: neotoma
Artist:cashay
Genre/Pairing: (slash & drama)
Rating: NC-17
Word count: ~61,000
Warnings/Spoilers: gore/animal sacrifice, gore, implied past abuse, gore/torture, homophobia/transphobia, set post-S5 SPN/ S1 Jericho

Summary: Lucifer is back in his Cage, but one averted Apocalypse doesn't mean much in the face of another, more human one. Sam Winchester, the Archangel Gabriel, and a man millennia out of his own time have wandered into a small Kansas town, where they get to deal with tree thieves, suspicious sheriffs, shady characters, political in-fighting, looming starvation, and the occasional pagan deity passing through. It's just one damn thing on top of another after The End of the World. [Crossover with JERICHO (tv series)]



Hrafn title


Prologue – I will lay my burden in the cradle of your grace )
I am deep into the revisions of my [livejournal.com profile] gabriel_bigbang story, which is going to be posted on the 23rd.

It has gone from a draft that was almost exactly 40,000 words, to a revision that is definitely going to top out at *over* 50,000 words. So far, only one story that long has been posted, so I have no idea whether people will even be interesting in reading it.

Fortunately, my alpha readers have been great, a friend has offered to do a line proofread, and I don't think I'm screwing *too* much with the Jericho characters -- beside squishing a religious horror universe into their nice hard SF post-nuclear cosy catastrophe world, I mean...

Right now, I have to beat off idea for sequels, for other fics, and better titles and just keep chugging through the revision and expansion.

ETA: Broke 50,000 words tonight. Hopefully won't get up to 60,000 before this is finished enough to post... but I still have to revise most of the climax, and maybe flesh out a sex scene.
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neotoma: Hello My Name is Loki (Gabriel) (Gabriel=Loki)
( Jan. 30th, 2011 12:39 am)
40K words for my draft for the Gabriel Big Bang -- though I still dislike the working title. I have 2 days to come up with one I like better, or I'm just going to have to go with 'Wayward Son', which is hardly an original title for a SPN fic, even a crossover fic.

And possibly I need to find a beta who is into the second fandom, since both me and my alpha reader got into the series in the course of me writing this monster...
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neotoma: Sam Winchester's bitch face (Sam WTF?)
( Oct. 12th, 2010 12:14 am)
So, onto eps 17-8 of Jericho...
Ep 17 One Man's Terrorist  )
Ep 18 A.K.A )
Ep 19 Casus Belli )
Ep 20 One If By Land )

Seriously, half the trouble in town is because they elected a pretty incompetent guy as mayor. This show is full of incompetency porn, and it's driving me nuts.
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On to episode 13 through 16 of Jericho.

The 13th episode, Black Flag, opens with Jake and Jimmy, one of our intrepid (incompetent) deputies, finding an elderly man frozen to death in front of his own fireplace... given that this guy was apparently living alone, I'm more than a little bit boggled that there is no mention of an effort to get people to share space in the houses that are best suited to wood-fire heating. You'd think that might be a useful thing for the town government to organize, given that there is no power or oil shipments after the apocalypse. Instead of letting people freeze to death one by one in houses designed for modern heating, might trying to get people in houses that can be heated by their fireplaces in groups so that the fire can be tended throughout the night have been a good idea? Just maybe?

Then we get to a town hall meeting and the Blackboard of Doom, with all of the town's critical supplies listed on it. This blackboard makes me wince -- someone put those numbers up, and to make them look dire, they complete skipped researching anything about Kansas.

By the Blackboard of Doom, Jericho has the following resources: ).

In ep 14, more things go wrong... )

It's not that isn't an interesting show... but it's also an intensely frustrating show, because the world-building fails often enough that I can't tell what of the drama is deliberate, and what is me noticing that things aren't working because they weren't thought through by the writers
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So I've seen episode 9 through 12 of Jericho, and I'm quite sure that the SPN crossover plot-bunny is nibbling at my heels because I want to put people who are actually competent in the series. Someone who has actually considered 'what do we do in case of the Apocalypse?' would be really useful, considering how many of the townfolk are acting headless chickens. Admittedly, the Winchesters were probably not considering a post-nuclear Apocalypse instead of a Zombie Apocalypse or the actually Book of Revelations Apocalypse they got, but I feel that Sam and Dean (and Bobby, and the other Hunters) had at least considered their plans for the End of the World.

The characters on Jericho, however? Seem to be genre blind to a man (did no-one at all read post-nuclear war disaster fiction in this town ever?), and several of them who have various levels of authority or standing in the town, are people who crumple in crises, instead of rise to challenges.

This is, of course, the point of characters like Gray Anderson, who is elected mayor during these episode. I am quite sure he is going to a disaster, because he is reacting primarily out of fear, instead of planning, and he's already tried to get Jonah Prowse, local grey-marketer and gang boss, killed under the guise of 'moving to a more secure location'. What he was going to hold up as more secure than the cells at the sheriff's office I'm not sure, considering the town of Jericho isn't even in communication with its neighboring towns, let alone the county seat or any part of the state government. He's really good at rallying people by fear, which turns people into mobs -- of course, he says that he's trying to avoid mob mentality, but he's going about it exactly wrong.

Then there is the misuse of characters with backstory -- it's mentioned casually in ep 12 that Eric Green, formerly deputy Mayor, has a law degree, and presumably a license to practice. Did no one think to get him to work organizing all the legal options for things like food rationing? How about a functioning justice system -- they lost all access to the court system, but it's not like they're going to run out of people committing crimes. Do you think possibly someone with legal training could be useful in setting up a system for jury trials, considering that the town is worried about bandits coming in and stealing supplies? Wouldn't it be useful to have a way to make operations against bandits, and rampaging mercenary have at least a scintilla of legality? Maybe someone who can figure out how to appoint a new Sheriff, considering the two surviving deputies come in the flavors of 'Amiable Marshmallow' and 'Xenophobic Twitchy Terrier.'

And I'm still rolling my eyes at the idea of the biggest farm in the area is being run by only three people, one of whom is a teenager, another is her scatter-brained-to-the-point-of-missing-an-IRS-audit-notice older brother, and the third is the IRS auditor who came to audit the farm's books for back taxes. If the town has only a limited supply of gasoline, and all vehicles built after they started putting microchips in are not working, all the farmers should be hiring farm hands and trying to buy up trained draft horses.

There is no mention of people being out of a job,or not getting paid for their job -- given that an EMP weapon in the first weeks destroyed any electronics above the complexity of an electric razor, it's a weird oversight. That killed the bank (no computers to check on accounts) and the ATMs, and people have been reduced to bartering for goods... but no banker or accountant has stepped forward to develop a local currency scheme. It's not even been proposed -- even though there are teachers, firefighters and deputies still to pay, and it would be pretty useful to actually be able to exchange cash for goods and services, like 20 lbs of pesticide that Stanley needs to kill the corn worms that got into his crops.

In other words, I think most of the characters on Jericho are dumb (by authorial fiat) and kind of want to put the Winchesters in there just to shake things up. At least Sam and Dean would ask sensible questions, instead of Deputy Bill (what *is* his last name) and his stream of embarrassingly clueless ones. (Seriously, I know the writers needed someone to ask questions for the audience, but I don't think it should be *law enforcement* that is that clueless.)
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So I've seen the first eight episodes of Jericho via Netflix. It's kind of right up my alley, with its post-apocalypse we've-survived-23-nuclear-bombs-hitting-our-country storyline.

Or it would be, if the characters were at all competent. So far, I'm only really in love with Heather Lisinski, who is an excellent girl gadgeteer for a elementary school teacher, Robert Hawkins, who is Schroedinger's terrorist-or-federal-agent, and Gail Green, who is on top of her family situation even if she can't control anything else in her life.

Unfortunately, I'm supposed to like Jake, who is one of the leads, and I'm finding him kind of 'blah'. It's his incredible skill and knowledge that he got in 5 years away that is always relevant to the plot, no matter if it makes sense or not, that is making me not like him so much.

It's not that he couldn't be that competent -- it's that other people wind up being written as incompetent to make him look better. This is especially glaring with the two surviving sheriff deputies, Jimmy and Bill, who I can only conclude weren't included on the search in the pilot episode that resulted in the death of the sheriff and most of the force because they were the *least* competent officers in the department. Jimmy is too agreeable and lets people who shouldn't have authority give him dubious orders (like Gray Anderson, who is some sort of alderman, and *not* part of the law enforcement chain of command at all), and Bill is twitchy, suspicious, and kind of gullible. Admittedly, in a rural farming community like Jericho is supposed to be, their normal workweek would include a lot of time on low risks incidents like traffic accidents and stray cattle, but they'd also be called on for more dangerous situations like domestic disputes and meth labs -- there is no excuse for them not being at least minimally competent, and I'm not sure that they are as of episode 8.

Same problem with the episode with the fire at the town library -- the firefighters might have been shortstaffed, but the idea that they weren't competent enough at their jobs to think of the pump station while Jake and Stanley do just makes me think the town is being run by Keystone Kops, not that 'Jake is awesome!', which I think was the intended message.

Also, I'm finding it hard to believe that the writing staff was trying to set up a love triangle between Jake, Heather, and Emily Sullivan -- Emily totally reads to me as a person who has gotten over whatever feeling she might have had for Jake years ago and is kind of glad that she dodged that bullet, since Jake seems to be the sort who leaves emotionally messy wakes. He's better than his brother, who is cheating on his wife and can't manage to break with her, but that's damning with faint praise.

Actually, I like Stanley and Bonnie and even Mimi, mostly when their storyline doesn't interact with Jake or Robert Hawkins. It's nice that the staff writers actually thought a little about the fact that they plopped their story down in the middle of farm country -- it would have been nicer if most of the characters remembered that they're surrounded by fields and pastures more often, and made note of it, instead of doing things like eating canned soups and stale cornflakes. The town government hasn't mobilized as many people as possible to work as farm labor in exchange for rations. Given that most of the electronics and thus most of the local vehicles were disabled by an EMP blast, it just makes me go 'huh'? You're going to need a lot of people to harvest hay or wheat without a motorized tractor.

There also seems to be nothing resembling an agricultural extension agent who might be able to rustle up plans for non-motorized farm management or something -- and yes, I realize the staff writers are probably not familiar with life in a small farming town, surely someone could have done research -- because at of episode 8, the characters seem to be in great danger of starving in the middle of the biggest wheat producer in the USA.

Anyway, now I'm nurturing a plotbunny for a Supernatural/Jericho crossover, and wondering how much I'd have to yank canon around for it to work. I can see S1 Jericho being post-S5 Supernatural, actually, with the bomb attacks being some baroque plot by Lucifer's forces to get revenge for his defeat -- sort of a 'if we can't have it, we'll smash the world anyway' plot.
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