Very nicely done! You may write longer when you do a love scene, but it's very good writing. I much enjoyed it. I need to backtrack and catch up - you've done a few more sections that I've missed.
Um, Turnspit has been circumcised? I agree with Iros, it's a mutilation. Erg. It's nice he doesn't care.
Iros has about as much advanced thought as a Harlekki teenager. Be afraid. :D
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Date: 2006-11-20 04:02 am (UTC)Um, Turnspit has been circumcised? I agree with Iros, it's a mutilation. Erg. It's nice he doesn't care.
Iros has about as much advanced thought as a Harlekki teenager. Be afraid. :D