Impressive. Iros did not back down in spite of Stormbringer's obvious power and authority. Once he matures, Iros is going to be a force to be reckoned with.

Turnspit, however, seems scared spitless of Stormbringer. If she really wanted to bait Iros, she might consider giving Turnspit some half-hearted pinches and pokes, just because she could.

And I do hope you plan to continue this once the mini-NaNo is over, even if the chapters take longer to do. I'm enjoying the hell out of it. :)