neotoma.livejournal.com ([identity profile] neotoma.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] neotoma 2008-05-11 01:15 am (UTC)

Carlos is kind of tricky for me to write.

Hal is lots of fun, though the change to his backstory means that he's got a pretty heartbreaking past. Actually, all of them do, except Robbie, who is truly a gentleman's son, not one ragged orphan or another that Carlos is saving.


[PS You wanna beta this when it's finished?]

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